Dear Diary
I know I shouldn’t have but I did. Diary, I snuck out to Valerie’s party and I met a guy there. He was sweet, kind and gorgeous. But he’s 25. As you know I am 17. He kissed me and it was the most amazing experience of my life. But we can’t be together. My parents found out that I kissed a 25 year old guy and they said that if I ever see him again they’ll disown me. Diary I don’t know what to do! He is only 8 years older, its not that much. My parents are 10 years apart, For Christ's sake! I think I love him but I don’t know if I should risk upsetting my parents. Oh Diary! Why is life and love so difficult!
1 comments:
Courtney, this is a good idea and it links quite nicely to parts of the play. However, it is fairly brief. See if you can add some more depth to the entry.
Also, be vigilant when proof-reading and editing - you have some silly errors that need to be looked for and addressed.
BTW - I hope you feel better soon :)
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